Bravo, Matthew! You have a rare and valuable (probably under-valued) gift of being able to see from the reader's perspective and paint them a picture that they can see with their own eyes, with whatever quality of vision they may have. I'm serious, Matthew. Only the best teachers, orators, storytellers, and translators (those who care as much as you do) have this gift. Not that many folk can see things from another's point of view. I applaud you!