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Brilliant. I love the way you wove in the dead child, both to introduce her personality and to give an early clue about her fate, and her dad's ultimately. Absolutely gorgeous piece of writing. So moving, sad. Well done, Steve! :D

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Adelia Ritchie, PhD
Adelia Ritchie, PhD

Written by Adelia Ritchie, PhD

Author of "The Accidental Expat: A Costa Rican Adventure", science lover, contributing editor at SalishMagazine.org, expat, seeking the interesting and unusual

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